The Killer

    Who killed the man! yelled the detective. I stared barrenly across the long table. Since you don’t want to tell me I will Throw you in jail for life! he yelled. I don't know , I said in a quiet voice.

The Crazy Happening

    Hi my name is Chucky and the craziest thing happened to me last week (flashback). I woke up thinking it would be a regular day, I got up took a shower, brushed my teeth because you don’t want hot stanky breath, ate a delicious dookie sandwich with some of the worlds best milk, Jaylon’s super duper milk, and threw a piece of gum in my mouth.I walked outside and jumped on my T-rex named spike and rode it to work. when i got to work my buddy Karl said the boss needs you to travel on his private airplane and attend a meeting in candy land. I said whatever so I got on my T-rex and rode to the airport and got on the plane. during the flight I was watching a movie when all of the sudden............... I had to go to the bathroom. when I got back to my seat, the plane started to shake but I didn’t care I sat back down and then the plane started to shake violently and they told me to fasten my seatbelt but I refused I knew something was wrong so I immediately ran to the cockpit. I looked at the pilot he was not breathing so I knew he was dead with extreme effort I tried to pull him of the seat he was really fat, he had to have had a heart attack because there was 10 happy meal boxes on the floor. finally I got him out of the seat and with even more extreme effort I pulled pack on the steering, put before I knew it the plane crashed.
    I woke up in a strange place it reeked of armpits, explosive farts, and unicorn poop.I got up and looked through the scrapes of plane, hoping to find useful items.The planes radio was smashed, but on the good side I found a gallon of water,a compass, a dull butter knife, and a jar of peanut butter. I started walking east looking to find a civilization I started to get scared because i kept hearing little voices. it was getting dark so i tried to make a bed above a fire to keep me warm during the night. the fire was a success but the second i jumped on the bed it broke and i fell down on the fire and my leg caught on fire running and screaming I tripped on a branch and hit my head on a boulder, fell in a puddle of water, and knocked myself out.
   

To Be Continued

Hunger games movie review

The Hunger Games movie was great, my favorite part was at the beginning of the games when they ran to get supplies from the cornucopia because that's where most of the killing and action was.The characters in the movie look a lot like the characters I imagined in the book. My favorite character was Katniss because she was going ham on the other tributes. My rating for this movie would be a 9 out of 10.Everybody should see this movie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rash

Bo(the main charater) live in the USSA(united safer states of america) and the government is really srict and a lot of things are illegal. Well Bo has anger issues and one day he got mad at someone and yelled at him and like a day later he got a rash and now they think bo gave him the rash but it was an allergic reaction to some skin lotion and then another girl in his class got the same rash but they think Bo gave it to her because they sit next to each other.

I dont think Bo is spreading the disease becuase it was a girl and she could have used the same lotion as the kid with the rash.

Cheezy Gritz

cheezy gritz for breakfast

cheezy gritz for lunch

cheezy gritz for dinner

cheezy gritz anytime

although this may not rhyme

But i don't have much time

to make this perfect cuz i cookin cheezy gritz

Cheezy gritz with bacon

cheezy gritz with eggs

cheezy gritz with toast

I'm tryin not to boast

but if I'm cookin cheezy gritz,

people love mine the most

Sunday morning with you my deer,

cheezy gritz for breakfast brings me a lot of cheer.

cheezy gritz with orange juice

cheezy gritz with apple juice

cheezy gritz with milk

When my cheezy gritz goes down your throat

you might mistake it for silk

Cheezy gritz anytime or anywhere

you just might eat them with a bear

that you caught with a snare  

but then you realize that you are a perfect pair

you decide to actually care

so you let him sit in your favorite chair

and then you made a dare

if the bear would eat 20 pears

and then ride a big ride at the fair

and finish the day off with some of Kyle’s delicious cheezy gritz

My name is kyle and im 14 and i like to skateboard, ride BMX, and play basketball or football.I was born in SD California but i moved toNC

My Lucky Day

    Hi my name is Carl; I was the average guy until that lucky day of mine.(flash back)It was February 23, and I was on my way to work when I saw a homeless guy getting peed on buy a dog. I walked up to him and punched him in the face and i ran away with his gold fish crackers. I ran 4 blocks and started to eat the gold fish. On my way to work I realized I was 2 hours early so I wasted them so I, took a picture  with Santa, went to the petting zoo and bought a llama,and then rode it to work.
    When I reached into my goldfish crackers and the worst thing happened, I ran out. I was about to throw it away when i saw the sweepstakes sticker so I ripped it off and put it in my pocket and continued my day.
    When I got home from work I was so tiered I fell asleep on the floor. A hour later I woke up and my head was wet I didn’t know what it was but it was yellow, I think its warm lemonade. There was something brown on the froor, i think it was brownies so, I ate one, they were kinda good, but I started to think it was something else, maybe cake.I got on the computer and signed up for the sweep stakes, I hope I win.
    RING RING, RING RING. Swiftly, I answered the phone. “Hello,” I said. “Hi is your name Carl Carmona Jr,” She said in a old fashioned manner. “Yes.” “You have won the sweep stakes, you are the president for a day.” she said. I was so excited I started to make out with Marvin, the llama. Quickly, I packed up my stuff, including Marvin and got on a train.
    When I arrived in Washington D.C, I rode Marvin all the way to the White House. I walked in and shouted My name is Carl Carmona Jr, the winner of the sweep stakes, everybody looked at me funny and thought I was stupid but I didn’t care. The lady I talked to on the phone walked up to me and said right this way. She said a lot of stuff, but I didn’t listen, I just wanted to look at everything. she walked me into the oval office and introduced me to the president of the United States of America.
    It was my lucky day,Marvin and I were sitting there in the oval office, felling like a hot shot in our suits. I realized I could do anything I wanted to do so I thought of the three things I want to change about America and I wrote them down on paper. They were, everything is free, everybody owned a llama, and it would rain sushi every other day. I gave it to my intern and she tooked at it and started to make the list come true.
    The day was coming to an end, I was sad I didn’t want to go home and work for stupid Guy named Mark, he is sassy and always makes fun of me. I am tired of him When I get back I’m Gonna quit my job. The day was over so I gave my suit back, they said Marvin could keep his. They said they will pay for a train ride home. It was fun being the president for the day. I will always remember this day when I was the President of the United States of America.

ELA showcase

My three favorite blogs are The Big Move, I Really Hate It, and I Really Hate It Continued. These are my top three because When People read these they can understand the story and whats going on unlike my old stories where you would be confused. When I was writing I was thinking of a fictional character and I made this character with really good description. It was like the character was real in the story I Really Hate It and I Really Hate It Continued. In the story I Really Hate It Continued, it proves I am a thinker because it took my 15 minutes to get the perfect description of a nurse for the story. My old stories like The chapter reviews for the Hunger Games book They were not in order and they didnt make much sense but my new stories flow and dont get people confused when they read it.



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I Really Hate It Continued (http://16grahak.blogspot.com/2012/02/i-really-hate-it-continued.html)
I Really Hate It (http://16grahak.blogspot.com/2012/02/i-really-hate-it_02.html)
Links to all stories and my blog (http://16grahak.blogspot.com/)

I Really Hate it Continued

    BANG!  BANG! Some how they figured out our payback plan. bullets hit the car door in multiple places I look around I see one bullet hit my homie in the brain every body races to our “safe house” we get back and everybody is checking out there wounds I finally realize I took 5 bullets, 2 in the leg, 1 in the arm and 1 in my hip and 1 bullet in the chest.
    I finally wake up. But it was 3 days later. my homie Dante was in the hospital. What happened I asked. you fainted so I had to rush you to the hospital they had to rush you into surgery he said. Your lucky because that bullet that hit you in the chest was 1 cm from your heart I'm surprised you didn't die on the way here. The doctor walked in, she ugly she had a huge mole with nasty hairs in it and yellow teeth and wrinkly looked like a 99 year old mans butt. she asked me if i needed anything. I said no. she said there is good news and bad news. I want the bad news first. OK well the bad news is you will need 2 weeks of rehab to learn how to walk again. good news is..... I stopped her I didn't want to hear it because there is no good news when you probably wont be able to run as fast as i used to and when your in a gang(and her breath stank, she got hot breath).
    The next day they did some X-rays to see if any bone damage was done or something like that but they told me i was fine but they want me to stay for another week so they can teach me how to walk again.
    That next day I felt like a little baby, falling when ever 3 steps. I got so frustrated I punched a hole in the wall the size of a Dante’s head and you know Dante he gotta big head. They told me that I would practice tomorrow but now they had to take more X-rays of my hand. At the end of the day I was felling sick to my stomach and Dante brought Jay milk, Queezy, X man, and B rock to see me. I asked if I could talk to Dante alone. They walked out and Dante said What is it and I said  I don’t want. beep beep beep.( from Dante’s point of view) That's all I heard from Boss The doctors rushed in tho the room and They tried to shock him back to life but it was to late he had already flat-lined. I never figured out what he wanted to say.



Comment What you think he would have said

I really hate it

BANG, BANG. I feel the wind from the bullet Two feet from my head. More gun shots go off . I look at my homies, one is lying on the ground with blood gushing from his arm. I wish I could help him but if i do that, i will be dead. I hear the sirenes of the cops so we run away, at least the ones who can. My crew runs for a half a mile before we get to our “safe house”.
    HI my name is Waldo but my “crew” calls me Boss. You are probably wondering why I said “crew” I mean Gang. I’ve been in a gang sense i was nine and Im fifteen now. I use to be a good student but when my dad died and my mom abandoned me some boys asked me if i wanted to be in a gang so i was stupid enough to said yes. That was the worst decision in my life.and know I’m writing about it.
    When we arrived at the “safe house” Loud music was playing. Our other gang members were over drinking and playing poker. They asked me if i wanted a drink but I said no. I just wanted to relax and let my wounds heal.
    The next day i woke up and i heard gun shots, our rival gang came to our safe house and did a drive by. 2 of my homies are dead so i was so mad. I was so mad i couldn’t think straight kept thinking of the good times we had together. That same day i was planning an attack on the rival gang by my self. Everybody thought i was crazy but I didn’t care. It was time to get pay back.
    My plan was to get 15 cars and 50 gang members to do a drive by on there main “safe house”.
the next day we started driving to their “safe house” i  was so nervous I couldn't stop shaking. I.............
   

I really hate it.

    BANG, BANG. I feel the wind from the bullet Two feet from my head. More gun shots go off . I look at my homies, one is lying on the ground with blood gushing from his arm. I wish I could help him but if i do that, i will be dead. I hear the sirenes of the cops so we run away, at least the ones who can. My crew runs for a half a mile before we get to our “safe house”.
    HI my name is Waldo but my “crew” calls me Boss. You are probably wondering why I said “crew” I mean Gang. I’ve been in a gang sense i was nine and Im fifteen now. I use to be a good student but when my dad died and my mom abandoned me some boys asked me if i wanted to be in a gang so i was stupid enough to said yes. That was the worst decision in my life.and know I’m writing about it.
    When we arrived at the “safe house” Loud music was playing. Our other gang members were over drinking and playing poker. They asked me if i wanted a drink but I said no. I just wanted to relax and let my wounds heal.
    The next day i woke up and i heard gun shots, our rival gang came to our safe house and did a drive by. 2 of my homies are dead so i was so mad. I was so mad i couldn’t think straight kept thinking of the good times we had together. That same day i was planning an attack on the rival gang by my self. Everybody thought i was crazy but I didn’t care. It was time to get pay back.
    My plan was to get 15 cars and 50 gang members to do a drive by on there main “safe house”.
the next day we started driving to their “safe house” i  was so nervous I couldn't stop shaking. I.............     


                                                                    To Be Continued

   

The Big Move

     When I moved to North Carolina I was 3 years old. (I remember somethings but not everything.) I was living in El Cajon, California. My dad lost his job, and its very expensive to live out there.
     When my family moved my dad drove the U-Haul and  mom, my 2 sisters, my dog, and I flew on a plane. That was my first time on a plane so i was freaked out at first but after about 30 minutes it was like a really fast roller coaster at 30,000 feet in the air, and I had a lot of fun.
     When we landed in Charlotte, North Carolina  it was like a desert everything was unfamiliar. My grand parents picked us up and we stayed with them until my Mom and dad found jobs and made enough money so we could buy our own house to live in.When my family was looking for a house me and my sisters would play hide and go seek and then get in trouble.When we found the perfect house I Almost got lost, like a dog, away from its owner, The first time I was there. I've been living in that house for 11 years.