BANG! BANG! Some how they figured out our payback plan. bullets hit the car door in multiple places I look around I see one bullet hit my homie in the brain every body races to our “safe house” we get back and everybody is checking out there wounds I finally realize I took 5 bullets, 2 in the leg, 1 in the arm and 1 in my hip and 1 bullet in the chest.
I finally wake up. But it was 3 days later. my homie Dante was in the hospital. What happened I asked. you fainted so I had to rush you to the hospital they had to rush you into surgery he said. Your lucky because that bullet that hit you in the chest was 1 cm from your heart I'm surprised you didn't die on the way here. The doctor walked in, she ugly she had a huge mole with nasty hairs in it and yellow teeth and wrinkly looked like a 99 year old mans butt. she asked me if i needed anything. I said no. she said there is good news and bad news. I want the bad news first. OK well the bad news is you will need 2 weeks of rehab to learn how to walk again. good news is..... I stopped her I didn't want to hear it because there is no good news when you probably wont be able to run as fast as i used to and when your in a gang(and her breath stank, she got hot breath).
The next day they did some X-rays to see if any bone damage was done or something like that but they told me i was fine but they want me to stay for another week so they can teach me how to walk again.
That next day I felt like a little baby, falling when ever 3 steps. I got so frustrated I punched a hole in the wall the size of a Dante’s head and you know Dante he gotta big head. They told me that I would practice tomorrow but now they had to take more X-rays of my hand. At the end of the day I was felling sick to my stomach and Dante brought Jay milk, Queezy, X man, and B rock to see me. I asked if I could talk to Dante alone. They walked out and Dante said What is it and I said I don’t want. beep beep beep.( from Dante’s point of view) That's all I heard from Boss The doctors rushed in tho the room and They tried to shock him back to life but it was to late he had already flat-lined. I never figured out what he wanted to say.
Comment What you think he would have said
He would've said i love you kyle! lol idk?
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ReplyDeletethat was funny especilly the man butt
ReplyDeleteHe would had said something like "your the best man ever"
ReplyDeletemaybe he said he does not want to die
ReplyDeleteI think he would have said, I shouldn't have got in this gang, Because look where it's got me.
ReplyDeleteI think he would have asked you to find him a different nurse....just kidding. Pretty cool piece, Kyle. It's tough to develop an imaginary character, but your doing a good job at not just creating his personality, but staying consistent and believeable with it. Great idea continuing this...
ReplyDeletei think he said i love u will u marry me lol hahaha
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